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Post by raincloud on Jun 27, 2008 19:04:21 GMT -5
open the b o o k_____________________ • call my name Cloudchaser • watched the moon 34 moons • to attract the opposite she-cat • the blood flows calico • on this hill i stand hopefully medicine cat • to stay loyal, to defend FaunaClan • Controlling my ability Cloudchaser has the ability to control the clouds and where they go. She likes to run inside them when they are close to the ground. such a pretty face www.catwelfare.org/image/upload/IM/Lost_and_Found/2007may17_anna.jpg• a look inside this work in progress_____________________________ • a rough sketch Cloudchaser has a calico pelt and she has a black back with brown patches. Her back has a few flecks of grey on it too. Her chest and her muzzle are white. The brown patches are more like a ginerish brown. Her paws have brown, grey, and black spots on them. Cloudchaser’s face has a black stripe and a brown stripe on her fore-head. Her eyes are a little bug-eyed and her eyes are brown and green with a bit of russet brown on the sides. • thoughts in my head Cloudchaser is mysterious and she loves to have fun. She talks to herself way too much and if a cat is near her, she will probably forget they are there and continue to talk to herself. She is very kind and caring though. She loves all of her patients and she forever will serve under StarClan’s will. She believe that there is some good in all cats, but maybe it’s just too deep to bring out on your own. Every cat needs help sometimes. • a story of my own none information we need__________________ • find it in the rules - c o d e w o r d- • etc..etc..etc.. - a n y t h i n g - e l s e?? ^ What do those mean? ^
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Post by тωιšт on Jun 27, 2008 22:36:44 GMT -5
Alrighty. First off by the blood flows I mean like are they calico, tabby, bengal what? The codeword you must read the rules to find it. After that the bio looks fine.
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Post by raincloud on Jun 28, 2008 18:21:21 GMT -5
Oh, okay. I thought where blood flows meant who are her kin.
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Post by radianteclipse on Jun 29, 2008 17:21:24 GMT -5
you still haven't found the code word, you will find it in the rules.
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Post by тωιšт on Jun 29, 2008 18:11:59 GMT -5
Oh yeah and just thought of this. Radiant will have to give this her final say but aren't clouds more weather/storm-related???
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Post by radianteclipse on Jul 2, 2008 8:30:00 GMT -5
Yes, clouds are more weather related than air related, I would say anyway. Please get the codeword from reading the rules. Then either change your clan or your power, clouds are to do with the weather, not the earth. If you want to keep that power then she will have to be in Caelumclan. Please fix these things before we accept your bio.
moved to pending bios
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