Torridstar

[klynel]

open the b o o k_____________________

• call my name Torridstar
  
• watched the moon 34 Moons
  
• to attract the opposite Tom
  
• the blood flows Calico
  
• on this hill i stand Leader
  
• to stay loyal, to defend Ignatius
  
• controlling my ability He is all powerful in the realms of fire and heat.
  
• such a pretty face [What a pretty kitty~]
  

a look inside this work in progress_____________________________

• a rough sketch
  His crystal blue eyes exist in paradox to his orange and smoke gray pelt. He is well proportioned to himself, giving balance a physical favor. His spine sticks out a little, and truly shows when he arches.

thoughts in my head
He is passionate in everything he does. Halfway, to him, is next to nothing. Torridstar is impulsive, and thinks on his feet. He refuses to regret. He values the opinions of his clan highly, and when upon a heavy decision, would rather hear from the clan. However, when he makes his claim, he expects complete compliance. He will not take rebellion lightly. Apprentices tend to run into more trouble than usual with him...

• a story of my own
  He was lighthearted as a kit and apprentice. He caused only as much trouble as the rest of his peers. He was never caught alone in his young moons, and it wasn't until he became a warrior did he start to mature at all. However, when he was in his third moon of warriorship, he shouldered as much responsibility as possible. It was not from ambition, but rather in feeling guilty for his flimsy nature in youth.
  
  As deputy, he grew increasingly punctual. What needed to be done was often cared for days in advance. He urged the little ones toward responsibility and unity in the clan more than the others. As a mentor, his teaching was relatively slow in comparison to the apprentice's peers. However, they were more sturdy in their teaching, and quicker to understand their new second nature. Efficiency was his standard, and polishing was only done when the base was complete.
  
  

information we need__________________

• find it in the rules admin edit
  
• etc..etc..etc.. If not accepted as Leader, his warrior name should be Torridshade.
  

[radianteclipse]

If he was to be leader then he would need to be older than 19 moons, he wouldn't even be a senior warrior at that age. Also leaders are all powerful in the clan, that means that they control all the powers of the cats in the clan. So if someone makes a cat for Ignatiusclan and say they could start a fire with their mind or something like that then your cat would be able to do that as he is leader. As for the power I'm not sure about that, it could be a tiny bit unfair in battle but we shall see, it is a good idea. After you fix the age and put that you're cat is all powerful then the four day period will begin to see if anybody else will try out. Good luck, go and post in the tryouts now.

[klynel]

Alright, thanks for the heads up. ^^

[тωιšт
]

Okay. I'm going to step in here because I tom calico cats are very rare, and those that do happen often have crappy immune systems and need constant care from people. Therefore Torridstar would not survive out in the wild. Please fix this. I know you might be cussing me out right now and hating me but he would not survive in the wild as a calico cat and I'm trying to keep some things on this site realistic.

[radianteclipse]

Well, I was going to point that out, but then I thought, we are roleplaying cats who can control water and fly, why shouldn't we be able to have tom calicos? Maybe we should discuss this somewhere else, twist?

[klynel]

Sorry for all the problems. I didn't know that. ><;;

Would tortoiseshell be better?

[twilight xx]

I can see both sides of this. One one hand, Twist you're right and calico toms are extremely rare. (Obviously the Erins didn't know this when they created Redtail). On the other hand, this is a kind of fantasy RPG so I guess we could allow a calico tom. I have made the mistake of creating one on another site and no-one objected. xD

And tortoiseshell is basically the same as calico, just without the white. My poinion is, keep him calico cause who's gonna stop us? The unrealistic police? I don't think so. Unless anyone has any major objections to this, I say don't change it.

And maybe make him slightly older? 23 moons is just under two years for a cat, and that's still pretty young. Sorry if this is causing unecessary problems. =P

[radianteclipse]

Not at all, no problem, this was going to come up eventually anyway, no?
And yes, I mean a calico tom is really nothing compared to cats with powers ect. I am pretty sure allowing calico tom's will not make much of a difference. I mean its not a 'realistic' roleplay or anything. You can keep him calico/tortishell for the time being, unless twist has and objections. Hrm, yes possibly a little older, I know I wouldn't even make a cat that young a deputy.

[тωιšт
]

CONGRATS